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(NOTE: The RAW file for this is gone (apparently) so its rare or something now.. ;))

I was out in Vancouver to sell my D70, when i watched this man slowly falling asleep, so i exposed for midtones, stepped down a full step and shot directly into the sun, which amazingly was setting right through the window. The light, was caused by a lensflare that i am AMAZED is falling directly on him. Its been helped a little, but the light is 95% real.

I wanted to move the bench because it wasnt parallel to where i was sitting, but i think it works just fine... You all know how much i love to shoot into the light ;)

Location is the Waterfront train station, Vancouver Downtown.

#2 in the Bob Dylan series. [link]

Based on the following lyrics;

While riding on a train goin' west,
I fell asleep for to take my rest.
I dreamed a dream that made me sad,
Concerning myself and the first few friends I had.

With half-damp eyes I stared to the room
Where my friends and I spent many an afternoon,
Where we together weathered many a storm,
Laughin' and singin' till the early hours of the morn.

By the old wooden stove where our hats was hung,
Our words were told, our songs were sung,
Where we longed for nothin' and were quite satisfied
Talkin' and a-jokin' about the world outside.

With haunted hearts through the heat and cold,
We never thought we could ever get old.
We thought we could sit forever in fun
But our chances really was a million to one.

As easy it was to tell black from white,
It was all that easy to tell wrong from right.
And our choices were few and the thought never hit
That the one road we traveled would ever shatter and split.

How many a year has passed and gone,
And many a gamble has been lost and won,
And many a road taken by many a friend,
And each one I've never seen again.

I wish, I wish, I wish in vain,
That we could sit simply in that room again.
Ten thousand dollars at the drop of a hat,
I'd give it all gladly if our lives could be like that.


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Sigma 18-50/2.8

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:iconhakancaydasi:
"Advanced Critique Encouraged" :sprint:

great shot, congratulations.
:iconmyvonne:
The Dylan words made me teary.. I long for those kinds of times...

but I'm lucky because I know that THESE times will be like that 30 years from now....

Beautiful image, wonderful thoughts.
:iconibinsanity:
Reminds me of Mappelthorpe's work with Patti Smith.

My only suggestion would be to have the bench's bottom plane level to the bottom of the image, with the window skewed instead. It'd bring the focus more to the model rather than the window, which really stands out in its perfectness.

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:iconmmmrobin:
I think the tones of this image are what make it so beautiful to me, ESPECIALLY with that light falling right on him. And somehow the photo makes me sort of sad. Maybe because he looks so somber and lonely. But then putting it with the lyrics, I feel nostalgic. :)

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Excellent, I love the light shining through and the reflection of the window on the floor.

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:iconobsidian-fox:
Wow, that was really quick :aww: thank you!

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:iconrhapsouldize:
yeah!! that's the kind of stuff i missed from you! amazing shot!

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:iconbuyobabyboo:
oh wow, that is cool :3 lucky you! *sw33tness, i have access to a photoshop now!*

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you nailed it just right.

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NIKON CORPORATION
NIKON D300
4/1000 second
F/2.8
18 mm
800
Jan 21, 2008, 2:41:10 PM

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